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“Shapes and shadows danced in distorted cacophony making it difficult to focus”

Firstly, the ‘for Her’ is missing.

This sentence needs a subject because otherwise not a single living thing could have focused, due to the shapes and shadows dancing in a distorted cacophony.

No, it was just Her that had the focus issues.

I can see it now; there she was, trapped in the half light, thinking to herself “fuck, these shapes and shadows dancing in distorted cacophony are making it difficult for me to focus”.

If the focusing in question was mental and not visual, same same, but even more so. It might explain things though.

I’m only joking. We all know what she really thought was “fuck, its hard to see in the dark”.

Maybe it was God, a He, that was thinking in these fancy, fancy words. He’s been at it so long that its all he’s got to keep himself amused.

Or possibly it was just the author thinking that people would be more impressed if (a) God was narrating the text, and (b) He did in flowery and complex prose otherwise unknown to spoken English (not even in the worst poetry), and (c) all of these conniptions were passed off as the real-time thoughts of Her.

And just for the record; shapes and sounds are visual. A cacophony is aural. Just saying.

The only focus issue here is my ability to read such pretentious bullshit.

Correct!